It was 2:00 am on June 14th, 1998 when Liam Ivory was up still doing experiments for a new product: dog shampoo. He made up many concoctions, but they all ended badly; from dogs hair turning different colors to them growing different body parts. Liam was on his 2068th potion when a test dog had drunk the preparation when he wasn’t looking. Liam came back and the dog was wearing glasses. Liam was flabbergasted at the fact that the dog was wearing glasses. Then the dog said out loud, ” Your mixing the wrong chemicals.” Liam corrected his mistake, and the shampoo created.
Well done on writing a great story for your 100 Word Challenge Alexia! I really loved your story, especially the part where the test dog drank the potion. That was really funny! Well done on writing a terrific story – keep up the awesome writing!
Mr. Russell
Team 100
Waterford, Ireland
I’m so proud that you were chosen on the showcase! Way to go!
What a creative story! You also used a colon and semicolon correctly. At the end you misspelled “your” and left out “was.”