100 word challenge week #7

Forest Ranch, the scariest abandon town in the United states. A tourist attraction visited by many people. Many people have visited the abandon town of Forest Ranch, but they have never made it out alive. So, my friends and I went to the town at exactly 3:00 in the morning. We went to the most haunted building on the location. When we entered the front door it slammed shut. We all got scared, but we went on to explore the haunted house. Then another door randomly open. When the door open I knew, we weren’t going to make it out alive.

1 Thought.

  1. This could be a spooky beginning to a scary tale!

    “Abandon” should be “abandoned.” You are missing three vocab words and commas. Watch yourself!

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